Hey guys, long time no update...but yeah, I'm here today.
Jadi beberapa hari lalu, aku terjumpa essay yang aku tulis waktu exam bi time aku form 5. Yeah, the truth is, aku jumpa kertas exam lama aku. Heheh.
So, essay tu, aku dapat markah yang agak tinggi dan aku rasa, I need to share it. Sebab ada banyak yang cari contoh esei bi SPM, kan...kan...
Hmm...dan soalan esei tu, bunyinya begini, "tulis cerita yang bermula dengan ayat 'It was a warm night and..."
It was a warm night and I was sitting outside of my house, watching the pitch-black sky, searching for the stars. However, it was tough as this night seemed to be starless. I could not hit the sack early like I used to, I also could not even dream how my day would turn out to be tomorrow. And all this because...
It was almost noon by the time I started a long walk home. The heat was stifling. Gradually, the grotesque shapes of the dark clouds gathered in the blue-grey sky. From that, I knew, it was going to rain!
In a twinkling of an eye, the drizzling rain beads started to fall. Quickly, I made my steps to the nearest bus stand. I did not realize, the steps that I took would lead me to a start of something new in my life. Something new ? I hoped I had more clear ideas on that! I saw one man. He looked tall with muscular body, black hair swept back from his forehead, and charming face with high cheekbones.
As I walked there, out of thin air, that man broke the silent, he asked, "Do you like rain?", I replied, "a...a...yes, sure", "why?", without wasting a second, he asked again. Hmm...at that juncture, I was thinking that he was asking me about Rain, a celebrated singer from South Korea. My brain might tend to think that way because I really like Rain. I took breath and gathered all my thoughts, saying, "He is handsome, talented, with cute dimple, a...and his voice...ah...I melt every time I...", while talking, I noticed that on his face mapped out every smile and grimace. Then, he burst out laughing. I was jarred. His laugh stopped me like a slap on the face. I was speechless. Then, he said, "a...haha...I'm sorry that I laugh so hard, you're so...funny! I didn't ask you about that Rain, yeah it's raining now, do you like it ?"
Hearing those words coming out one by one from his mouth, my face turned red, as red as beet root. I whipped around to avoid looking at him, and only silent remained for my answer of his question.
Out of the blue, he asked again, "So, you're going to that school tomorrow ?", he pointed the school near the bus stand with his index finger and then continued, "I have to tell you this, it's better if you don't go to that school. Frankly, my heart bleed for you, something bad surely will happen if,, if you study there, but your parents left you with no choice, right ?", slowly those words coming out from his mouth. I was burning with curiosity of why he said something like that. Therefore, I asked, "Why did you say that? Do I know you? Who are you to say that ?", I noticed the crooked smile on his face, he then said, "Guess who am I ? A fortune-teller.", "Wh...what ?", as I said that, the rain finally led up and he left me just like that.
My eyes followed his steps, in front of the mysterious school, he vanished in a blink of an eye. I swore, he really vanished! I started to ponder about his words. Pondering. Thinking. Finally, I decided not to go home, I had to go somewhere else.
"I'm not going to school!!", I shouted quite loud, fortunately there was no one there. I had a hunch that what the fortune-teller said was true. Hmm, but I did not know where must I went to.
Out of sudden, a silver car appeared in my line of sight. Oh no! It was my father!
I thought, my day could not be any worse than this day. Father brought Seth with him too. Seth, my off-again, on-again boyfriend. Right now, we were off. To face him after meeting the fortune-teller was not the right timing. My father might had notice that I did not like to be in the same car with Seth as he said 'Sorry!' as I entered his car.
It was only silent in the car, but then Seth tapped me and said, "Look...look, I hate eating chocolates...I...", his voice truly annoyed me, in anger, I shouted, "Don't eat them then!". He was, as he used to be, ignoring my words and said, "I hate how chocolates immediately melt on my fingers. I mean, am I...that hot ?", he sounded really funny, innocently saying that. Oh my God! However, I could not help it and burst out laughing. That moment, I might had forget about the fortune-teller.
I knew, things were not all made of honey. Actually, I still could not forget about that! Even after laughing so hard, it still there stuck on my mind.
At night, I picked a sheet, and vaguely, wrote down about the fortune-teller. Then, I tore it into shreds. It could not be seen by anyone! Once again, I thought deeply about this thing, it was hard for me to sleep amid the anger and confusion. I felt like insomnia. However, "Whatever will happen tomorrow, I'm going to face it!", I monologue those words again and again, until I fell asleep.
"I am ready for tomorrow!".
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LOL. Tu lah essay yang aku tulis back then when I was form 5. Don't know where I got that idea back then...but anyway, thanks for reading this.
Hope this essay will be beneficial to those who read it.
p/s : Ada lagi esei bi aku yang aku share, and esei tu pun dapat markah tinggi jugak, siap masuk majalah sekolah aku zaman dulu...heheh....apapun, kalau nak baca, click essay
Bye!
That was good . I wish my essay is good as yours . I'm having SPM for this year and my English Test on the Mid-Term exam was a belacan + tempoyak . I really hope that you can give me some tips on how you study for the exam . Thanks :D
ReplyDeleteHi, all the best for your SPM :-)
DeleteBelacan + Tempoyak ?
Btw, when I was 17 (2014), for English, I used to read a lot of famous English novels ( Divergent series, Hunger Games etc ) and I read Reader's Digest magazine. Also, I wrote diary daily.
By reading, you can improve and expand your vocabulary easily. (This will help you write a better essay)
By writing, you can train yourself to write better day by day. (Practice makes progress)
Reading and writing are two most important things if you want to score in English subject :-)
Once again, I wish you all the best and Good Luck :-)
Boleh eh essay ada pertanyaan..?
ReplyDeletebecause my teacher said..
tu tak.membantu:(
Hmm, kenapa pula tak boleh ada pertanyaan ?
DeleteKenapa pula tak membantu ?
Hmm, tapi kalau cikgu awak yg cakap, maka betullah tu.
Pasti dia ada penjelasan tersendiri bila cakap macam tu.
Saya pun tak pasti nak cakap boleh or tak boleh.